foreshadowing?? I don't think that is the right term, this isnt a novel or a tv show, you aren't anticipating what will happen... I think simile fits better, example "then i exploded in her mouth like a pimple being popped" but thats only if you write it out... aside methaphor means--- per dictionary, "something used, or regarded as being used, to represent something else; emblem; symbol." So it's perfectly acceptable to say it was a metaphor. =)
2:02 your so dumb. where in this text does it say "she asked me to pop her zit" fucking genious. he probably did it while she was down there and didnt notice.
It might have taken him more than 30 seconds just because he popped it WHILE she was blowing him, he never said as she started blowing him. Which means she may have been blowing him for minutes prior to that.
Ok first off this was pretty good I like it....but one thing is wrong. This wouldn't be a metaphor for what was going to happen in the next 30 seconds it would be foreshadowing since it was 30 seconds prier to the explosion in her mouth.
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